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LOLZ...Sorry I'm have OCD when it comes to grammar.
But anyway this story board is very entertaining to read and since I've listened to the voice cast I feel that this short is going to be epic!
Best lines EVER. surrendering to the village idiot and all that. I love Louis's wit, and your voice actor does an awesome job with all his sass. ALL your voice actors are awesome, and it's so cool to watch your project develop and see the story boards and the concepts~
by comparing this video:
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to your new one
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the old one had much more action inside, there was a really fight while the fight between Louis + James + Santiago in the new storyboard was more just mocking. it is still its funny, but it looses a bit of its seriousness.
of course I have no idea how it would influence the sense and the ending/continuing of the story, but I would just say that there should be a bigger conflict, fight scene...just saying, but still GREAT work