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I'm really excited to see the scene of the paintings I just adore how James loses it
Just one comment, when Santiago is going at Louis, you use the expression "Tú maricón", being an spanish speaker I would recomend omiting the "Tú" given the fact that when angry one tends to use less words, if you use "tú maricón" you cut the air coming out your lungs, but if you use only "Maricón" the insult comes out in one blow from inside your gut (you feel it in the stomach and then spurt it out), and unlike english in spanish we rarely use articles when we are insulting someone, like "Hijo de puta" not "Tú hijo de puta" or the way you used "Malparido".
Keep up with the amazing work!